02/09/09- author's note

This is my first draft of my analysis of an argument given at a community public space. I like this peice because I have been descriptive in my observations, but I do feel that it will need a lot of work to get it to where it needs to be. I don't think the organization is strong enough and I also am not confident that I have described my assesment of the argument completely enough yet. I am writing the paper in an if:then form. Should I tyr and describe the arguments throughout or should I describe what I saw and assess the arguments and audience at the end?