I beleive that my final draft is in line with the rhuberic the class created for the assignment, and follows the guidelines set for the assignment. I like this peace becuase I was descriptive in analyzing the arguments made by the store. Also, the place I analyzed is one of my favorite places in Fort Worth. There are no Central Markets in Florida, so I was pleasantly suprised by the set up of the store and the selection when I went there for the first time. Therefore, I enjoyed writing about and analyzing the space.
The final draft is organized chronologically becuase I felt that this was the best way to describe the arguments in the way that the customer is exposed to them. I found it difficult to analyze the arguments while wrting chronologically, so I would like some feedback on if I was effective in writing this way without being confusing.
I was ill on one of the class days from this unit, on 2/2, and therefore do not have commented annotated notes or the annotated notes on the blog for the workshop.
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