Monday, March 9, 2009

3/09/09

This is a first draft for 3/9/09. I will attempt to add to and finalize a new draft within the next week.

I think the peice needs a bit more assessment of authors' stylistic elements and overall analysis of the arguments made. Also, I feel the paper is a bit jumpy and could use better organization.

Please let me know if there is any advise that could be useful to help me better organize the paper and argument analysis.

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