This draft is still not what I would consider a finalized draft. I expanded a bit from my first draft on one of the resources being anaylyzed but didn't do much expanding on the other resources. Also, I still need to finalize my works cited page. There are two types of citing throughout the paper (sec and par) because one of the resources was broken up into sections and not paragraphs (so this is correct).
I would like the peer revising to provide me with ways I can make the paper a little more clear and give me examples of points that could be expanded on.
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